tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post1090267576261961423..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Carpe Diem #529 Footprints Jazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-6874062515533462492014-08-02T13:09:12.177-04:002014-08-02T13:09:12.177-04:00Delightful to see you here, whenever you are able....Delightful to see you here, whenever you are able. <br /><br />Ah, I see what you mean - the stage and steps, like walls having ears :)<br /><br />The form I used I was told was a renga, basically two haiku with two lines of 7 syllables in the middle. Sometimes when a single ku is not enough to tell the story I extend it. Thank you for your visit and kind words.<br /><br />Continued success with the music you make, instrumental or otherwise :) Juleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00571987715911379165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-75106339381371553592014-08-01T11:23:41.311-04:002014-08-01T11:23:41.311-04:00Namaste, my friends.
Thank you for the visits and...Namaste, my friends.<br /><br />Thank you for the visits and the kind words.<br /><br />Cheers!<br /><br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-84903946663977827122014-08-01T06:00:42.763-04:002014-08-01T06:00:42.763-04:00I wondered where you were...and here you are--in e...I wondered where you were...and here you are--in excellent form! Thank you for these little gems, especially the stage floor, which I am sure remembers all those scuffling feet.Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-42378410695772360442014-08-01T03:54:15.781-04:002014-08-01T03:54:15.781-04:00No excuses needed JzB ... i am glad to see you her...No excuses needed JzB ... i am glad to see you here again ... you, and moose, goose and spider were missed. Hope all is well ... What a wonderful series of haiku you have shared. Your first is awesome and mysterious, but your last is really my favorite ... NamasteChèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-6014364940719486852014-08-01T01:59:50.799-04:002014-08-01T01:59:50.799-04:00It is wonderful to have you back, JzB - moose and ...It is wonderful to have you back, JzB - moose and goose were missed! :)<br />Does the stage floor remember...makes me wonder...and wander...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03743225966653292820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-12707179512410361912014-08-01T01:12:34.037-04:002014-08-01T01:12:34.037-04:00These are wonderful -- I'm enjoying the orb we...These are wonderful -- I'm enjoying the orb weaver's delight -- but I'm especially enjoying your wonderful, mysterious first poem -- ! Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com