tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post1944569071392560717..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Carpe Diem "Analyze that haiku" #2, "seeking for relief" Jazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-86647419622719627372014-09-24T01:26:52.652-04:002014-09-24T01:26:52.652-04:00Nice ... and loved the haiku ... like the can'...Nice ... and loved the haiku ... like the can't pinpoint the moment ... I agree that love, the feeling inside of us .. can maybe live on forever ... at least whist we still live.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13596079559559123392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-9905791129490551392014-09-24T01:26:15.647-04:002014-09-24T01:26:15.647-04:00Something happened but that wasn't when the lo...Something happened but that wasn't when the love ended. I've seen it so many times. Good one JzBJanicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10359355308140058671noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-6542648053334891432014-09-22T21:31:43.002-04:002014-09-22T21:31:43.002-04:00Can't pinpoint that moment -- so very painfull...Can't pinpoint that moment -- so very painfully powerful, and very painfully real. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-27020353472750996072014-09-22T16:06:27.511-04:002014-09-22T16:06:27.511-04:00Haven't seen it, but it seems to represent man...Haven't seen it, but it seems to represent many relationships.<br />I like your case study as well.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-17122422447800951232014-09-22T14:09:33.559-04:002014-09-22T14:09:33.559-04:00Haha. I watched the trailer to that movie. "S...Haha. I watched the trailer to that movie. "Seriously? It's like you're photoshopped!."<br /><br />Great senryu take on the prompt. I love the phrase (L2 an L3) it's very strong and could be used as part of a tanka.Lollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16526692343815904632noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-70349208654905048092014-09-22T13:59:08.302-04:002014-09-22T13:59:08.302-04:00Wonderful post. Using a real 'case study' ...Wonderful post. Using a real 'case study' is a very good idea. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18329773014118837806noreply@blogger.com