tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post2785538961448960139..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Five Sentence Fiction - EDGEJazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-89057965609261132442013-04-16T14:04:10.155-04:002013-04-16T14:04:10.155-04:00Really enjoyed this and loved that last line: '...Really enjoyed this and loved that last line: '...the scream it let loose was an even worse assault on the senses ...'Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-44833517839668590612013-04-14T22:29:46.358-04:002013-04-14T22:29:46.358-04:00"There is always a soft spot somewhere on a d...<i>"There is always a soft spot somewhere on a dragon's belly, if you are lucky enough find it."</i><br /><br />St. George told me the same thing, so I guess it must be true. <br /><br />Nice job!K R Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04759225924353249792noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-63103347761950293282013-04-14T15:21:11.691-04:002013-04-14T15:21:11.691-04:00A great story, although I find dragon-slaying fabl...A great story, although I find dragon-slaying fables so hard to hear, have ever since I was a child. Your description was so clear. xElizabeth https://www.blogger.com/profile/02339050531976726293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-50265326114390108882013-04-12T23:02:44.860-04:002013-04-12T23:02:44.860-04:00Excellent - there is nothing quite as exhilarating...Excellent - there is nothing quite as exhilarating as dragon slaying! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-88241186199330291512013-04-12T19:24:43.477-04:002013-04-12T19:24:43.477-04:00Dragon is no friend to moose, goose or man
Cheers...Dragon is no friend to moose, goose or man<br /><br />Cheers!<br />JzBJazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-74967077151240936882013-04-12T18:46:48.808-04:002013-04-12T18:46:48.808-04:00You killed the dragon. What would moose and goose ...You killed the dragon. What would moose and goose say? Nice story in five sentences. Going to give it a whirl methinks.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-7601784198237576952013-04-11T22:14:48.579-04:002013-04-11T22:14:48.579-04:00Good one! I do love a good dragon...well, a drago...Good one! I do love a good dragon...well, a dragon, anyway.<br />Scott<br />Mine: http://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2013/04/11/five-sentence-fiction-prompt-edge-4112013/ Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com