tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post3807603802737885953..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Carpe Diem #245, Listening Jazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-80085273870898735062013-07-15T19:00:21.791-04:002013-07-15T19:00:21.791-04:00Agree that your second one is so beautifully roman...Agree that your second one is so beautifully romantic. Moose and goose is brilliant. Could "hear" them stop frozen in the forest before knowing if the sound means danger. Also love that the spider is listening the vibration.Maggie Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13044824920398442496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-87640138471998105642013-07-15T12:35:55.067-04:002013-07-15T12:35:55.067-04:00AH that second haiku is gorgeous. I like the roman...AH that second haiku is gorgeous. I like the romance in that one.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-57443463909344774692013-07-15T00:53:30.655-04:002013-07-15T00:53:30.655-04:00I think the moose and goose one is your best today...I think the moose and goose one is your best today--painting a picture but no telling.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-17793338856065450272013-07-13T22:30:01.995-04:002013-07-13T22:30:01.995-04:00Your second poem hits the sweet spot for me tonigh...Your second poem hits the sweet spot for me tonight! I too have someone whose words and touch are still important... and a glass of wine never hurts!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com