tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post5825327495544221497..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: The Lure of a FairieJazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-87347617277153388392013-01-04T14:33:18.584-05:002013-01-04T14:33:18.584-05:00You drew me in from the start --- I am mesmerized ...You drew me in from the start --- I am mesmerized by fairies!! However, I only want dealings with the friendly type!! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-6131788983045590132012-12-15T05:17:03.537-05:002012-12-15T05:17:03.537-05:00Very nice one JxB, the fairies are not just sweet ...Very nice one JxB, the fairies are not just sweet and inocent. <br />I think that taking a piece of fiction or poetry and modifying it is very good. After all poetry can be storytelling as well. <br /><br />Björnbrudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-43792863334485476342012-12-14T20:58:03.611-05:002012-12-14T20:58:03.611-05:00...you've animated a clear scene of how we can......you've animated a clear scene of how we can be easily lured by fairies around... very mythical and you possess a rich, creative mind to pen all of these here... i enjoyed it a lot... thanks for sharing... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-11558557992292280342012-12-14T20:12:35.766-05:002012-12-14T20:12:35.766-05:00I was quite content with the examples simply becau...I was quite content with the examples simply because I know writing in 'you' form is quite tricky. You, however, have accomplished it quite well. "I" was definitely drawn in.RMPhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04054771419356465116noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-56099266801184840792012-12-14T19:47:44.511-05:002012-12-14T19:47:44.511-05:007 Grandaughters !!!! Wow.
You are a lucky man. A...7 Grandaughters !!!! Wow.<br />You are a lucky man. And fairies must therefore abound!<br />I see by the links that you are truly into fairies -- you have be estrogenized!<br />SmileSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-79680455162782218042012-12-14T19:32:35.560-05:002012-12-14T19:32:35.560-05:00Fabio -
Well, for one thing, I have 7 granddaught...Fabio -<br /><br />Well, for one thing, I have 7 granddaughters.<br /><br />But it may have started here.<br />http://jazzbumpa.blogspot.com/2009/02/fairies-more-historically-important.html<br /><br />With a couple of side tracks.<br /><br />http://jazzbumpa.blogspot.com/2010/03/what-hell-friday-part-2-free-market.html<br /><br />http://jazzbumpa.blogspot.com/2011/10/confidence-fairy.html<br /><br />And more recently got onto the current track starting here.<br /><br />http://retirementpastels.blogspot.com/2012/10/five-sentence-fiction.html<br /><br />Cheers!<br />JzB<br /><br />Jazzbumpahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-39833029937820238302012-12-14T19:15:36.148-05:002012-12-14T19:15:36.148-05:00Fun.
I have never read more of fairies until I sta...Fun.<br />I have never read more of fairies until I started reading poetry blogs.<br />Actually, I have never hear much at all about them.<br />Well, except on Peter Pan.<br />But then I am not British -- but you are from the Great Lakes region and I am from Cleveland. Where the heck did you start caring about fairies?<br />And you are a guy, for gosh sakes! What is up with that?Sabio Lantzhttp://yuanfields.wordpress.com/2012/12/14/uselessness/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-11466045202627132132012-12-14T18:12:04.003-05:002012-12-14T18:12:04.003-05:00nice...there is a little magic to this....faeries ...nice...there is a little magic to this....faeries again, nice..and the green...i like the fireflies too and it drew us right in...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-60082827904703098872012-12-14T17:09:50.979-05:002012-12-14T17:09:50.979-05:00I agree that the second person works so well for t...I agree that the second person works so well for this. Has a magical quality about it. Thanks for sharing. I'll take another look at the poems I chose as an example. The ones I first wanted are protected by copyright laws. I feel more poets in our age do employ 2nd person. Thanks for the observation.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-82156131442658220592012-12-14T16:23:23.181-05:002012-12-14T16:23:23.181-05:00I think it works quite well. The short lines, and...I think it works quite well. The short lines, and rhythms have the quality of old-time tale - it's very nice. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-28716614558886348602012-12-14T16:21:21.929-05:002012-12-14T16:21:21.929-05:00This is a very magical write! I liked the second ...This is a very magical write! I liked the second person form for this. It drew me right into the poem!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-17892929456314961392012-12-14T16:03:46.212-05:002012-12-14T16:03:46.212-05:00I, for one, enjoyed your yuse of you...parts of s...I, for one, enjoyed your yuse of you...parts of speech were never my thing, and i say who cares as long as you get your point across!! Love the fairy front...anything fairy gets my love...dragyonflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05120619234558103029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-40182323441756937362012-12-14T14:16:14.774-05:002012-12-14T14:16:14.774-05:00I like it whether it fits the bill, or not :) She ...I like it whether it fits the bill, or not :) She sounds interesting to me.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com