tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post6733969557341484018..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge #12, Southard's "the swing of the gate". Jazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-47274585691649776052013-09-01T17:22:54.032-04:002013-09-01T17:22:54.032-04:00I agree with you on the fragmented feel
I wasn...I agree with you on the fragmented feel <br />I wasn't sure I caught what I was supposed to<br /><br />saying that I think your rendition is delightful<br />guess we just need to ask Kristjaan to prompt us with this form some more... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13414513238308254080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-14695581603699648452013-08-31T14:00:40.059-04:002013-08-31T14:00:40.059-04:00I love your play on words! I found this to be a ch...I love your play on words! I found this to be a challenge too!WabiSabihttp://wabisabipoet.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-60335037806362404122013-08-31T09:18:13.300-04:002013-08-31T09:18:13.300-04:00Ohh this was nice Ohh this was nice brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-91010672906058949212013-08-30T16:59:16.748-04:002013-08-30T16:59:16.748-04:00Awesome JzB ... I like the humor of the twist in t...Awesome JzB ... I like the humor of the twist in this Tan Renga completion. Thank you for your effort to write and share haiku at Carpe Diem.Chèvrefeuillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00848986700725789154noreply@blogger.com