tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post826460764379704886..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Flash 55 PlusJazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-17041441694484243742015-03-02T10:57:06.491-05:002015-03-02T10:57:06.491-05:00wonderful wordplay!wonderful wordplay!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-88370124372051467052015-03-02T09:28:02.345-05:002015-03-02T09:28:02.345-05:00You have told an entire tale in your allotted 55 w...You have told an entire tale in your allotted 55 words, and used the colour yellow too!Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-67151188935355893342015-03-02T03:01:27.209-05:002015-03-02T03:01:27.209-05:00This one was a little sad, but great poetry.. how ...This one was a little sad, but great poetry.. how can you think it's better to be dead than yellow...?brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-25347803447189608512015-03-02T00:45:01.762-05:002015-03-02T00:45:01.762-05:00cool rhymes in here, with the non-yellow caballero...cool rhymes in here, with the non-yellow caballero ~grapelinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14929030339206629628noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-20221374264365413512015-03-02T00:42:46.893-05:002015-03-02T00:42:46.893-05:00Very enjoyable....great use of 'color' her...Very enjoyable....great use of 'color' here--using it in terms of what it means and insinuates instead of the color it literally portrays. Very intelligent!!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-40569365265424623442015-03-02T00:41:19.098-05:002015-03-02T00:41:19.098-05:00Yes, love the word playYes, love the word playSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-60763746430403643242015-03-01T21:41:51.078-05:002015-03-01T21:41:51.078-05:00Ha, clever!Ha, clever!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-36827583283114336752015-03-01T19:50:00.993-05:002015-03-01T19:50:00.993-05:00This was fun... lead loaded dying caballero... bu...This was fun... lead loaded dying caballero... but he wasn't yellow.<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com