tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post8330624086741994195..comments2023-10-24T06:18:23.222-04:00Comments on Retirement Pastels: Five Sentence Fiction - ZombieJazzbumpahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07337490817307473659noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-83192664517280605782012-09-29T20:48:47.071-04:002012-09-29T20:48:47.071-04:00I imagine he won't be climbing into that windo...I imagine he won't be climbing into that window anymore. Nice story :)Lillie McFerrinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05367116687588265202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-87804206116484568572012-09-26T18:37:22.310-04:002012-09-26T18:37:22.310-04:00And the moral of the story is "Cheaters never...And the moral of the story is "Cheaters never win..." I agree with CC. This did have that "Thriller" quality to it. Nice jobs. injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-42750630248179586482012-09-26T14:57:58.948-04:002012-09-26T14:57:58.948-04:00This totally made me think of Thriller by Michael ...This totally made me think of Thriller by Michael Jackson. Well, minus the cheating husband. :)C.C. https://www.blogger.com/profile/06070310862785263964noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2701530989919762222.post-70518491063615742042012-09-25T17:25:09.645-04:002012-09-25T17:25:09.645-04:00"...people are dying to get in." That is..."...people are dying to get in." That is an old line, but still a really good one! <br /><br />Cheers, <br /><br />W. Wayne Assirattihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13959368598307352186noreply@blogger.com