Because this was one of my mom's phonograph records. Her birthday is next Thursday. She'll be 92, and she's still going strong.
inspirational haiku
Spring breeze !
on the hill I firmly stand
with the great resolve
difficult for me to wrap my head around
this is the best i could do
~ 1 ~
when the wayward wind
wafts in tempting from the west
who yearns to wander
~ 2 ~
the mountain stands
with great stony resolve
in time the breeze wins
~ 3 ~
when the breeze blows
the old trombonist listens
and understands
~ 4 ~
in the spring breeze
cherry blossoms flutter down
splendor in the pink
~ 5 ~
in the spring breeze
goose soars like an eagle
moose has hay fever
~ 6 ~
what orb weaver knows
about the springtime breezes
mayfly never learns too late
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This was well done.
ReplyDeleteThanks!
ReplyDeleteLolly, your response haiku is terrific.
Cheers!
JzB
Lovely stroll through your haiku...pink splendor...ah yes. west wind is calling me. Your thought on the trombonist is quirky but also thought provoking. Nice!
ReplyDeleteWonderfully composed series JzB. I definitly like them all.
ReplyDeletePoor Moose! May his sniffles subside soon!
ReplyDeleteStanding Firm
Your second one is defintely my fav
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