The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
of JzB see my other blog, Retirement Blues. (There be dragons!)

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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Saturday, November 16, 2013

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVII, Jazzbumpa''s " my little green lawn''

I'm delighted to see one of my haiku in the tan renga challenge.

This one actually pleases me quite a bit.



my little green lawn
dreams about the pampas grass
i dream of the stars                                       (c) Jazzbumpa

in their pale shimmering light
the universe stands open                              (c) Jazzbumpa

I'll be around to check all your completions in a day or so. 

 Thanks for playing along.

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month #XVII

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9 comments:

  1. kaykualaNovember 17, 2013 at 3:19 AM

    It provides all the challenges to move forward. That is true! Nicely JZB!

    Hank

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  2. AnonymousNovember 17, 2013 at 5:08 AM

    A lovely completion. By the way, I noticed and enjoyed your tags on this one :)

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  3. Sumana RoyNovember 17, 2013 at 8:20 AM

    a beautiful and appropriate completion....

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  4. AnonymousNovember 17, 2013 at 10:24 AM

    Such a lovely first haiku and the wonderful completion too

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  5. brudbergNovember 17, 2013 at 4:29 PM

    An open universe.. a wonderful (and also frightening) thought

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  6. stephNovember 17, 2013 at 7:45 PM

    Like a collective consciousness... that's the way I read it. Very nice.

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 18, 2013 at 1:09 PM

    Beautifully composed second stanza JzB ... I like this completed Tan Renga.

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  8. AtreyeeNovember 18, 2013 at 4:08 PM

    A fitting completion to your lovely Haiku JB-loved the possibilities of Universe standing open:-)Thank you for sharing your Haiku for this challenge-enjoyed this one:-)

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  9. AnonymousNovember 19, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    Lovely.

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