The Lighter Side of JzB

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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Sunday, January 6, 2013

Carpe Diem #89 - Tomorrow


TOMORROW

When tomorrow comes
One more opportunity
One more step through life

 ~  ~  ~  ~  ~

What is it bringing
Only tomorrow can say
What is it taking

 ~  ~  ~  ~  ~

When it arrives here
Today becomes yesterday
Tomorrow is now

 ~  ~  ~  ~  ~

The first future step
From today to tomorrow
The last of the past


I can't say I'm especially pleased with this set. It all seems trite and obvious.

Carpe Diem  # 89
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14 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleJanuary 6, 2013 at 2:45 PM

    Really nice series on tomorrow. I like the last one the most. Thank you for your daily effort to write haiku for Carpe Diem.

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  2. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2013 at 7:05 PM

    i agree tomorrow is a lot of things.. have a great day ^^

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  3. carol l mckennaJanuary 6, 2013 at 7:40 PM

    well penned and reflective haiku ~

    (A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^

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  4. AnonymousJanuary 6, 2013 at 9:12 PM

    There's wisdom in those there words my friends. Thank you :)

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  5. DulcinaJanuary 6, 2013 at 9:23 PM

    Nice series, much to think about.
    :)

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2013 at 3:41 AM

    Wonderful Haiku. Simple words but so powerful and so much to ponder!

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  7. PirateGunnJanuary 7, 2013 at 4:05 AM

    "what is it taking" superb line!

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  8. Madeleine Begun KaneJanuary 7, 2013 at 4:17 AM

    Delightfully optimistic!

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2013 at 5:51 AM

    I think we are often our worse critics. They are all quite nice ( # 3 being my fave )

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2013 at 8:40 AM

    Tomorrow is now! Absolutely. All we have to do is to see. A great choice of words. Ese

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  11. joanneJanuary 7, 2013 at 12:14 PM

    all that time travel! very confusing!

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  12. RheumatologeJanuary 7, 2013 at 1:47 PM

    "It all seems trite and obvious." No, not at all! It makes it hart for me to find something on tomorrow this evening.

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  13. Magical Mystical TeacherJanuary 7, 2013 at 8:09 PM

    Sometimes the obvious needs to be restated! :)

    Ship to Tomorrow


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  14. AnonymousJanuary 7, 2013 at 10:29 PM

    Very nice set.
    Yesterday's Morrow

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