CAVE
What would Sigmund say
About spelunking all night
In my vivid dreams
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Let's go spelunking
There in the deepest dark cave
We'll find adventure
About spelunking all night
In my vivid dreams
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Let's go spelunking
There in the deepest dark cave
We'll find adventure
A home for hobbits
Under the ground - or is it
A home for Gollum
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A forlorn halfling
Riddles for a gold ring with
A poor doomed creature
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Home to trolls and worse
Is this hole in the ground a
Storehouse of treasure
Hehehe, funny spelunking.
ReplyDeleteWhat a cave you have found! Freud's comment not suitable for children.
I love the adventure in the other three...very suitable for all children.
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my haiku fits perfectyl with your first photo. hahaha outstanding! lol
ReplyDeleteGreat set! I especially loved the first!
ReplyDeleteAmazing set of haiku, love the last three on Gollum ... really this series feels like a fairy tale. Thank you for sharing these on Carpe Diem.
ReplyDeleteSigmund would wonder and find either something that really was here or something that wasn' t at all. :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful approach to the theme...with that humorous spark. Ese
Dear me! Actually with some amusement I wonder if kz has seen your first haiku with picture..there is a certain parallel..
ReplyDeletean extremely cool collection... you are such a sharp wit....
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