~ 1 ~
by lantern light
when I look upon your face
lovely mystery
~ 2 ~
one evening in spring
as we walked under the trees
raindrops in lamplight
~ 3 ~
in the spring lamp light
casting a squat shadow
a fat toad
~ 4 ~
in the lantern light
old man sits and listens
by an empty chair
~ 5 ~
lamps in the distance
moose and goose don't understand
think they are fireflies
~ 6 ~
springtime lantern light
death trap for moths and flies
spider goes hungry
by lantern light
when I look upon your face
lovely mystery
~ 2 ~
one evening in spring
as we walked under the trees
raindrops in lamplight
~ 3 ~
in the spring lamp light
casting a squat shadow
a fat toad
~ 4 ~
in the lantern light
old man sits and listens
by an empty chair
~ 5 ~
lamps in the distance
moose and goose don't understand
think they are fireflies
~ 6 ~
springtime lantern light
death trap for moths and flies
spider goes hungry
~*~:~*~
Really very nice - some classical haiku there.
ReplyDeletei really loved the last one!
ReplyDelete3 and 4 for me today JzB. Thank you :)
ReplyDeleteMy heart goes out to the hungry spider!
ReplyDeleteTiny Lanterns
haha really adore moose and goose, they think its fireflies.lol ^^
ReplyDeletehow romantic the first haiku is.. i love the idea of two people being together for so long but each time they look at each others' faces, it's still a wonderful mystery ^^
some fun, some romance, and all brilliant today...
ReplyDeleteOh that fat toad was brilliant.
ReplyDeleteOh you pulled a good one today...I had just settled in for a romantic set, when BAM there was a fat toad! Oh right, this is JzB's place ! What was I thinking! I am in awe of your range, my friend! You do it all, and everyday! Wow.
ReplyDeleteFirst two are quite romantic and lovely. Fat toad made me giggle.
ReplyDeletealoha JzB - that first ku took me by surprise. i like that. i like that you have allowed me to ponder on that mystery. way cool. aloha.
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