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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku


"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Wednesday, December 26, 2012

Sensational Haiku Wednesday - Vision

Recently, I've been striving to achieve first-third line interchangeability, without torturing the language too much.  The first entry here fails to meet that goal, the others do, with varying degrees of success. Except for the the second, they all [most especially the first and last] can be related to last week's FSF, with the same prompt.


VISION

"I must look a sight"
She said, red-cheeked and wind-blown,
"No dear, a vision!"

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That Superman had
X-ray vision - the power
To see through clothing

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The touch of my eyes
Do you feel it caress you
When you pass me by?

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When you look at me
Do you see the same love as
When I look at you?

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Things I see in dreams
Imaginary creatures
Fantasy landscapes


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2 comments:

  1. Fun haiku ~ ^_^

    Happy New Year ^_^ (A Creative Harbor) aka artmusedog and CArol ^_^

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  2. Wow...I like them all, I LOVE the first one !
    Thanks for sharing all your haiku...
    wonderful to see and read.

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