Took a sad, lonely turn with this blue image.
Courtyard Blues
in the blue courtyard
we shared blue margaritas
salty memory
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in the blue courtyard
we met alone at midnight
taste of stolen sweets
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in the blue courtyard
long i sat waiting for you
long i sat waiting for you
you with him loving
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in the blue courtyard
where our tempers flashed red hot
sitting cold and blue
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in the blue courtyard
now i drink the blues alone
you and he are gone
you and he are gone
A true sad story... the end felt even lonelier with all that blues
ReplyDeletesad saga...bittersweet as the margaritas
ReplyDeletemix and twist of lives, real blues
ReplyDeleteStill, so many yummy flavors and colors mixed in ... A new girl is coming; I can feel it.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you've captured a whole story in your haiku series - I especially like:
ReplyDelete'in the blue courtyard
we shared blue margaritas
salty memory'
and
'in the blue courtyard
now i drink the blues alone
you and he are gone'.
This is so poignant!💕
ReplyDeleteAwesome post Jazzbumpa ... a short and sad story with the blues in the lead ... well done. Your series touched me deep.
ReplyDeletewonderful how you used the blues in your haiku series, a bit of a sad story but very nicely written.
ReplyDeleteMargaritas and memories... Deliciously refreshing.
ReplyDeleteThese are beautiful blues!
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