~ 1 ~
volcanic action
tectonics or erosion
whence thou small mountain
~ 2 ~
small mountain
old man leans hard
on his walking stick
~ 3 ~
the view
of a pair of small mountains
delightful
volcanic action
tectonics or erosion
whence thou small mountain
~ 2 ~
small mountain
old man leans hard
on his walking stick
~ 3 ~
the view
of a pair of small mountains
delightful
~ 4 ~
goose can fly
over a small mountain
moose takes the low road
~ 5 ~
in a small bush
on a little mountain
tiny spider web
goose can fly
over a small mountain
moose takes the low road
~ 5 ~
in a small bush
on a little mountain
tiny spider web
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The old man must be REALLY old to be leaning so hard on his walking stick! I REALLY like this one, JazzBumpa! REALLY!!!
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you are such a rogue - 'tiny mountains' indeed....
ReplyDeleteNo comment on #3, but really enjoyed your other haiku. The old man this time won my heart ♥
ReplyDeleteYou've done it again, JzB. Taken me through the gamut of small mountain 'takes' I am with the old man on his trek, I lean pretty hard when I hike uphill these days and the haiku itself it perfect!!
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I not sure what made me giggle more, your words or the image you chose to go with them JzB. :)
ReplyDeleteThat second haiku is really a gem. I can see that old man leaning on his walking stick while climbing a small mountain. Thank you.
ReplyDeletehaha i wonder what it is about this theme that seems to set people aflame. lol i missed the playfulness in your haiku ^^
ReplyDeleteVery picturesque, JzB! The last for me the most. :)
ReplyDeleteThe second haiku is mind blowing...
ReplyDeleteLove the old man leaning on his stick. Great imagery. Of course I also adore anything Moose and Goose say.
ReplyDeleteyou really like spiders! I do too so I should start more haiku about them!
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