Inspiration
odoku na watashino nakamano tsu no yoruno hana
lonely flower
my companion
for one night
~:~:~
My humble offerings
~ 1 ~
after just one night
in the flower's company
i'm the lonely one
~ 2 ~
first flower of spring
with luck you won't be lonesome
for very long
~ 3 ~
which kind of flower
the bloom of a growing plant
or river water*
~ 4 ~
one lonely flower
is that not enough to please
an old man
~ 5 ~
first lonely flower
hopeful sign for moose and goose
that spring is coming
~ 6 ~
first lonely flower
draws a single lonely fly
to the spider's web
after just one night
in the flower's company
i'm the lonely one
~ 2 ~
first flower of spring
with luck you won't be lonesome
for very long
~ 3 ~
which kind of flower
the bloom of a growing plant
or river water*
~ 4 ~
one lonely flower
is that not enough to please
an old man
~ 5 ~
first lonely flower
hopeful sign for moose and goose
that spring is coming
~ 6 ~
first lonely flower
draws a single lonely fly
to the spider's web
()
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* sorry - old crossword puzzle trick
flow-er = a thing that flows
flow-er = a thing that flows
These are all so nice ... leaving me speechless.
ReplyDeleteIf one lonely flower can't please the old man, then there's something wrong with...the flower? :)
ReplyDeleteOne Fading Blossom
all are extremely nice ^^ though your fourth is utterly lovely.
ReplyDeletemoose and goose
ReplyDeletenever fear
spring's hope is eternal
Am feeling sad but also such beauty in your haiku today.
ReplyDeleteWHat a marvellous set today JzB, each one a prize bloom!
ReplyDeleteYour first one really touched me.
ReplyDeleteAll wonderful!
ReplyDeleteall well-done, but there's something about that old man that is so beautiful
ReplyDeletethat floer is dangerous (6)
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