in the
ceaseless sound
of the water
there is Buddha
of the water
there is Buddha
© Santoka
Taneda
"The goal of this CD-Special is to write/compose an all new haiku in the same sense, tone and spirit as the one given ... and because Santoka Taneda was a fore stander of the 'free-style' haiku you don't need to count syllables or use kigo or one of the other "classical rules" of haiku. Maybe that makes it easier, but I am not sure of that."
the pond near my house
still topped with ice and snow
silent water
© JzB
~:~
Lovely image of silence in my head.
ReplyDeleteBut when the sun arrives --- such a wonderful song!
ReplyDeleteFelt this one, Jzb :)
beautifully done!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteA profound silence indeed!
ReplyDeleteWhat the Water Says
One day---soon, I think you hope---the water's silence will be unleashed.
ReplyDeleteAmong River Stones
43 degrees now
Deletehope for Spring springs
cheers
JzB
ah a lovely still image --- very peaceful! Bastet
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