The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
of JzB
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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku


"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Friday, March 6, 2015

CD Tan Renga Challenge #76



in the space between the trees
only emptiness
without emptiness no forest

no forest means no wood
and then what would we do

 that's a bit too glib and facile

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in the space between the trees
only emptiness
without emptiness no forest

we need forests for the moose
just as the goose needs wetland

 more in the right spirit i think but preachy -  i'm not delighted

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in the space between the trees
only emptiness
without emptiness no forest

echoes in the tree spaces
as moose and goose converse

 that might be what i'm looking for 

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2 comments:

  1. yes ... I think the second was the better ... :-)

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  2. jzb, I'm with you on the last one.

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