The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
of JzB see my other blog, Retirement Blues. (There be dragons!)

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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Carpe Diem''s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIII, Lothar''s (Rheumatologe) "this dark autumn night''


this dark autumn night
the bright stars of milky way
cries of geese above                                (c) Lothar (Rheumatologe)
a cold wind blows them southward
as leaves swirl wildly below                      (c) JzB

Carpe Diem''s Tan Renga Challenge Month #XIII

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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousNovember 13, 2013 at 2:08 AM

    Now I know what a goose leaves behind when they migrate.
    Great finish to the renga JzB.

    eider down

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  2. Gillena CoxNovember 13, 2013 at 6:15 AM

    a lot of animation throught out the tan renga, well done

    much love...

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  3. Magical Mystical TeacherNovember 13, 2013 at 7:01 AM

    Fortunate the geese that get swept along by a tailwind!

    My Tan Renga Completion

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  4. AnonymousNovember 13, 2013 at 8:49 AM

    exquisite ~ love the 'swirling leaves below' ~ happy day to you, carol, xxx

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  5. AnonymousNovember 13, 2013 at 11:29 AM

    Congratulations – you've really caught the spirit of autumn and migration.

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  6. brudbergNovember 13, 2013 at 3:57 PM

    Love you here.. but were is the moose...

    this dark autumn night
    the bright stars of milky way
    cries of geese above

    the lonely moose is grounded
    scratching snow for food

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  7. WabiSabiNovember 13, 2013 at 7:55 PM

    It's always good to catch a ride on a breeze! Lovely completion!

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  8. ChèvrefeuilleNovember 14, 2013 at 6:15 AM

    A really nice completed Autumn Tan Renga JzB. Good to see you here again.

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  9. sunNovember 14, 2013 at 11:10 AM

    i like the way you blew in the wind for your finishing touches. ☺

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  10. AtreyeeNovember 15, 2013 at 2:26 AM

    Beautiful completion JB-mine has"southward" too:-)

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  11. AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 3:52 PM

    I caught a wonderful image with your ending.

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