the Buddha himself
did not start enlightened
he walked the path (c) Cathy Tenzo
in still darkness i follow
stumbling in his bright footsteps (c) JzB
did not start enlightened
he walked the path (c) Cathy Tenzo
in still darkness i follow
stumbling in his bright footsteps (c) JzB
Speaking of paths; check this out.
Good thing you didn't start your first line "still in darkness.."
ReplyDeleteI'm glad to know that there's at least a little light for you! ;)
Also glad to see you back after the recent savage storms in your part of the world!
I love what you added to my haiku. I'd add that you'll stumble less when you realize the only footsteps you need to worry about are your own. We all create our own paths :)
ReplyDeleteI feel that way sometimes...
ReplyDeleteI like your completion JzB. As Cathy says 'every one has to find his/het own path. Namaste.
ReplyDeleteWe are all stumbling, I think! Even the Buddha stumbled! :)
ReplyDeletenice one, JzB - love the contrast of dark and bright footsteps. ☺
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great idea to walk on a lighted path.
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