I haven't forgotten you, though.
Today's tan renga challenge to add a second [7-7] stanza to this haiku.
1
harbour moon
the loneliness of fishermen
under lighthouse cliff (c) Joe of Flat Frog Haiku
sad fisherman remembers
the beauty who got away (c) JzB
2
harbour moon
the loneliness of fishermen
under lighthouse cliff (c) Joe of Flat Frog Haiku
honk of goose and low of moose
echo over the water (c) JzB
I like the chorus of moose and goose here!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back, Goose and Moose---and you too, Jazzbumpa! So good to see you all again!
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Both of these evoke sharp images! well done and welcome back!
ReplyDeleteThey sure get sad losing out on the promising ones. I love the 1st. Nicely and welcome back JzB!
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Glad to see you here again JzB ... with two wonderfully composed continuations of Joe's Tan Renga.
ReplyDeleteNice to see you again.. love these ones..
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