This week I have chosen for a haiku by one of our latest family-members Jazzytower of Thoughts and Entanglements. She wrote this haiku in response on Jane Reichhold's prompt "decay" and I think she has done a great job with that prompt.
Tan Renga looks very similar with Tanka, but there is a difference. A Tan Renga is written by two poets and a Tanka by one poet. Tan Renga is a short chained verse with two links.
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blessed with breathtaking beauty
reclaimed by the earth © Jazzytower
above the engraved grey stone
sky-etched V of south bound geese © JazzBumpa
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An elegant completion -- can envision the geese crossing over the cemetery ---
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A I love watching our Canadian geese move South to our neighbours...lovely completion:)
ReplyDeleteAh .. love the image of the geese returning south ... beautiful image and a great completion.
ReplyDeleteLovely images of autumn came to my mind.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful scenery you have brought into this Tan Renga JzB
ReplyDeleteNice, I was in the park this weekend that's a part of a reserve, A whole flock flew over, low in the sky 'cause they had just taken off. What a sight it was to see! And the noise!
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