Carpe Diem - Techniques #3

Repetition

I have to admit that I'm more taken with the idea of repetition within a haiku than I am with the examples given.  Though I am quite pleased with the striking image of this one. 

Full Moon Over Black Lake 7/23/13

the river
the river makes
of the moon 

© Jim Kacian (1996) 

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when keeping still

we can still hear the sounds

of still smaller things

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in just a moment

such a meaningful moment

with so much moment

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in the deep weeds

as goose honks deep low of moose

deep in the weeds

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when the flies fly

orb weaver casts her net

for flying flies

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[h/t to Mystic]

clouds grace the sky
under the sheltering sky
we gaze up to the sky
 

 © JzB (2015)