The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Carpe Diem #1273 Into The Sea

Hmmm - scroll down my page and you'll find the last few entries are poems of some sort, all related in some way to a body of water.  Well - it is the source of all life.

Today, a tan renga, the first stanza © Jane Reichhold (1937-2016.)
Second stanza by me, the wonderer.
melting into the sea
the full moon
leaves a candle bright 

illuminated path way
could i walk on that water

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4 comments:

  1. Pat ROctober 10, 2017 at 2:45 PM

    Oh, I like that direction. Nice.

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  2. Elsie HagleyOctober 11, 2017 at 3:49 PM

    Interesting words, I don't think that would be a good idea to walk on water, but it's a great thought if only we could.

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 12, 2017 at 2:08 PM

    Beautiful continuation in this Tan Renga JazzBumpa I like the path you have taken with that 2nd stanza.

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  4. lynn__October 12, 2017 at 11:56 PM

    Makes me think of the sea of Galilee and a man who walked on it...

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