"You all know the drill. Share a piece of poetry as the spirit moves you, new or an old favorite. "
So here is an old one, one of my demented sonnets from many years ago. This pastiche was going to be a humorous parody of a well known sonnet, speaking of a relationship gone cold, but instead took a much darker turn, perhaps in keeping with creepy October.
Enjoy.
Or not.
THY PALLID LOVELINESS
Shall I compare thee to a winter's night?
Thou art more lovely in thy pallid chill.
Rough winds shake bare limbs, but thine hold tight,
Ever rigid, rigorous, and still.
Sometimes too cold the evening sky-light glows,
Encircled in a wisp of winter cloud
That with the gray dawn sends the falling snows,
Blankets the earth with its white morning shroud;
But thy eternal winter shall unfold,
Never to thaw thy fast frigidity.
And rigor shall not lose the mortal hold
That binds thee in frozen rigidity.
Now once again I breathe on thy cold flesh,
And with thy pallid loveliness enmesh.
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Some appropriate music
Some appropriate music
It makes me want to reach for a cup of coffee.
ReplyDeleteI really like the fun tone of the piece, and the eerie edge... the implications of all this cold flesh.
This sonnet almost reads as a ghost story but just so much fun!
ReplyDeleteOh I love the pastiche aspect of course... but even more I love how you have made this into a ghost story... I want to hear it read to some eerie music
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like something Jack Skellington might whisper to Sally when the moon is just right. Sweetly macabre.
ReplyDeleteClever adaptation...
ReplyDeleteI honestly don't mean this as an awful pun. I thought this was very cool.
ReplyDeleteI LOVE awful puns!
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