parking lot morning
tires slashed paint job key-marred
feces on the hood
But what greeted her this morning is described above in what might or might not be a haiku. According to the police, it's gang-related vandalism. That this happened in Holland and not the Detroit metroplex where we live is a bitter irony.
When Jane Reichhold advised us to be alert for the haiku moments in life, this is probably not what she had in mind.
Sorry to hear the 'tribulations' in Holland ~ Wishing a much better happening ~ quite the haiku.
ReplyDeleteStay safe, and this is often how it happens--trouble comes unlooked for.
ReplyDeleteAm so very sorry to hear this. Our news just showed two teen girls were responsible for arson in our town on several occasions. Sometimes it's a scary, sad world. Good to write about it. Therapeutic haiku ♥
ReplyDeleteSorry to hear that, but yoy have caught it so well in this haiku with a kind of humor ... like the English people.
ReplyDeleteProbably not...but it's a moment you will never forget, now immortalised in words. Hope this mess gets cleaned up and the culprits are apprehended!
ReplyDelete5 a.m. Tribulation
.. I think a haiku moment helped a little --- but really bad when things like this happens.
ReplyDeleteThis is very sad...
ReplyDeleteTribulation of an Old Woman
This is an awful incident. What would moose and goose do?
ReplyDeletea deeply philosophical question
Deletei'm pretty sure I don't know the answer
Cheers!
JzB
So very sad,JzB. I hope it gets sorted out quickly and that the trauma recedes for your granddaughter especially!
ReplyDeleteActually Amanda was able to be a calming influence on her mom.
DeleteThanx.
JzB