~ 1 ~
here we are two fools
man and woman naked
what could go wrong
~ 2 ~
god's high mystery
can it be revealed
in man's base instinct
~ 3 ~
the urge says thou shall
but the commandment says not
god's sense of humor
~ 4 ~
old man peruses
woman man lofty angel
which one would he chose
~ 5 ~
goose soars upward
to the angel - moose stays down
with naked people
~ 6 ~
one tree holds a snake
the other engulfed in flames
no place for spider
here we are two fools
man and woman naked
what could go wrong
~ 2 ~
god's high mystery
can it be revealed
in man's base instinct
~ 3 ~
the urge says thou shall
but the commandment says not
god's sense of humor
~ 4 ~
old man peruses
woman man lofty angel
which one would he chose
~ 5 ~
goose soars upward
to the angel - moose stays down
with naked people
~ 6 ~
one tree holds a snake
the other engulfed in flames
no place for spider
===> )~~~
Missed you! These are great but #3 is my favorite! And that is not the only joke he's played on us!Lovers
ReplyDeleteNice to see you here again JzB ... ah that wonderful lightfootedness and humour in your haiku. Just an awesome take on The Lovers.
ReplyDeleteAh, so pleased to see you again JzB :)
ReplyDeleteGod's sense of humour...what could go wrong?
Yes, such a lovely stroll down JzB lane. Giggling at moose and loving the spider. Love your wry humor in the rest.
ReplyDeleteAll very different takes on the prompt. Great job!
ReplyDeletethe moose and the spider star in delightful haiku....fun post
ReplyDeleteYour style has been sorely missed! As for that goose & moose..no comment!
ReplyDeleteAgree with above, you have been missed... a lot of nice ones here.. but the favorite is the first.
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone.
ReplyDeleteI felt a little rusty putting these together, glad they didn't disappoint.
Cheers!
JzB
hope you felt missed
ReplyDeleteI missed the weekly characters of the Moose Goose and spider
you give us so many places for our imaginations to soar in these haiku - a delight
here we are two fools
ReplyDeleteman and woman naked
what could go wrong
Good question JzB! Why it had to be the apple!
Hank