Inspirational haiku
the night of Spring -
an elbow-pillow
on the desk
an elbow-pillow
on the desk
I must admit to being utterly baffled by this
Kristjaan's is much more accessible
last moon of Spring
leaning on the windowsill
leaning on the windowsill
watching her beauty
My attempts
~ 1 ~
as spring time ends
there is one more chance
for a late frost
there is one more chance
for a late frost
~ 2 ~
after the full moon
it's safe for us to plant
delicate crops
~ 3 ~
it's safe for us to plant
delicate crops
~ 3 ~
the night of spring
its darkness gives way to
the dawn of summer
its darkness gives way to
the dawn of summer
~::~::~
They're all pretty, but #3 is exceptional.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful triplet of haiku JzB and you make me blush with the nice words which you share here about my haiku which I wrote inspired on the one by Kyoshi Takahama.
ReplyDeleteNo 3 three excellent JzB!
ReplyDeleteYou shouldn't have told us you were baffled, it doesn't show at all! (I was baffled too) The third one suggests that one goes to bed in spring and wakes up to summer! I like that idea!
ReplyDeletei love how in the last haiku you emphasized how the dark gives way to a more beautiful light and that first haiku, i loved the idea of seizing the day
ReplyDeleteWonderful threesome here!
ReplyDeleteI love the third as well...wonderful!
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