the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the verandah
in the damp gathering gloom
my long shadow follows
~ or ~
the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the verandah
moose and goose walk in the woods
under the dark dripping leaves
~ or ~
the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the verandah
in a dry ceiling corner
spider awaits moist insects
~ and, oh, what the hell ~
the rainy season
in the damp treetop
a lonely cuckoo calls
~ and, oh, what the hell ~
the rainy season
a paper lantern in hand
I walk along the verandah
a lonely cuckoo calls
:-))))) The last one got me!
ReplyDeleteThese are so remarkably done
ReplyDeleteWow...all so wonderful! Am awed.
ReplyDeleteAll three are wonderfully composed JzB and make different Tan Renga. Awesome.
ReplyDeletewell-done on all, espec. the last...
ReplyDeleteI especially like the first one... Great imagery with that long shadow
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