Inspirational Haiku, by Kikusha-Ni
tenmoku ni koharu no kumo no ugoki kana
in the teabowl
this motion of the clouds
of 'Little Spring'
Plus, I am delighted by Kristjaan's effort
in the rain puddle
the beauty of moving clouds
beneath my feet
I am taking this prompt as an invitation to pause and reflect, not just on nature, but on myself. I see many people find comfort in religion. But I am an agnostic and a secular humanist, and have rejected religion as a key to either understanding or enlightenment. So I do not see haiku as the fulfillment of any religious ideal. Rather, to me, it is a minimalist intellectual exercise attempting to capture in words some small but meaningful aspect of life or nature. I appreciate the discipline imposed by the limits of the form, and see that as part of the challenge.
Often, I fail in my attempts to write real haiku - or even senryu - and opt instead for some small bit of structured cleverness. Such is my ego. And thus my scattershot responses to the prompts, and reliance on animal props. Sometimes they oonch up the challenge, but they also provide focal points.
I am in awe of nature, humbled by the universe, and actually do have a spiritual side - though I cannot claim to understand it. Thus my humility. I am a part of the universe, and might even be connected to all things in it.
But it remains beyond my comprehension.
~ 1 ~
am i a haijin
or just a glib old man
playing with words
~ 2 ~
i please myself
with little word images
are they something more
~ 3 ~
virtual image
on the surface of my tea
universe reversed
~ 4 ~
reflect on nature
emulate the moose and goose
living ego-free
~ 5 ~
moving clouds
seen in dew on spider's web
do not move her
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