EARLY BLOSSOM
Back when we were twelve
The first girl to have nice curves
Lived across the street
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I was a shy lad
Mothers of early blossoms
Had nothing to fear
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Those early bloomers
I wonder how they aged - are
They withered flowers
The first girl to have nice curves
Lived across the street
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
I was a shy lad
Mothers of early blossoms
Had nothing to fear
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Those early bloomers
I wonder how they aged - are
They withered flowers
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
A few memories and thoughtful question there!
ReplyDeleteThat's what time does to all flowers, loved the second one!
ReplyDeleteyou are a riot! love the fun twists of your haiku.....
ReplyDeleteVery different take on 'early blossoms' ... and that's really well done. The third is my favorite.
ReplyDeleteJazzbumpa, you crack me up!! Every single day!! Thanks for this. Brings back memories of 7th grade. Good times.
ReplyDeleteYou describe myself at a young age. Yes indeed what happened to those girls, and the lads who where less shy.
ReplyDeleteHmmm --- very interesting direction!!! Middle one gave me a smile. Early Blossoms
ReplyDeleteSuch sweet thoughts. I enjoyed these very much and even tried to pay on the word curves some more.
ReplyDeletemy old street
still mentally rounding the curves
of the early bloomer
cheers! ; )
Thanks, all.
ReplyDeleteLolly - nice riposte.
or is it a wry post?
Cheers!
JzB