COLD WINTER BLAST
Alberta clipper
Sailing in a fleet of clouds
Temperature falls
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Temperature falls
My breath makes a stormy cloud
On a long walk home
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Sailing in a fleet of clouds
Temperature falls
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Temperature falls
My breath makes a stormy cloud
On a long walk home
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On a long walk home
Cold winds redden my ear lobes
A warm fire awaits
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A warm fire awaits
I rush through the biting wind
Alberta clipper
Scoured clean by the wind
ReplyDelete-powerful statement right there ^^
i love the idea of a warm fire awaiting..
That first haiku is especially magical and dramatic! Lovely!
ReplyDeletedid not read yours before I wrote mine! I chose the easf coast.Enjoyed your series of poems today
ReplyDeleteA wonderful cascade on the theme...excellent thanl you :)
ReplyDeleteLove the series and the learning something new too!
ReplyDeleteWe have thought in the same direction about the innocence of snow :) And then cozy warm fire...wonderful. Ese
ReplyDeletethe red earlobes! That's an awesome haiku!
ReplyDeleteI always hear of the 'Lake Effect', and you have described it so well....lovely cascade, and the last is fantastic in true haiku meaning
ReplyDeleteWOW! JzB what a nice cascading haiku, good job on the one by Shiki. Thank you for being a participant in Carpe Diem.
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