The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
of JzB see my other blog, Retirement Blues. (There be dragons!)

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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Wednesday, January 9, 2013

Three Word Wednesday CCCXI

 Three words for TWW CCCXI:

FOCUSED
PAIR
VACANT

A Vignette [or is 
It a morality play?]
Told in Haiku Form


Into the vacant
House crept the pair so focused
On the physical
~  ~

Yes she drank too much
He was focused on her pair
Her eyes were vacant

 ~  ~

Focused on the wrong
Target this vacant pair missed
A chance to find - what

~  ~

A pair of strangers
Now they pass focused on the
Distant horizon

~  ~

Why have I focused
On this pair of vacant souls
What is their message


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6 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 9, 2013 at 12:12 PM

    Indeed... what is there message? I suppose they'll continue the search, eh?

    http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2013/01/09/youth-on-their-own/

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  2. Stan SkiJanuary 9, 2013 at 12:15 PM

    Enjoyed that... :):):)

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  3. Sheilagh LeeJanuary 9, 2013 at 12:24 PM

    as a way to find LOVE?

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  4. Old EggJanuary 9, 2013 at 2:39 PM

    Perhaps they should have checked out the vacant house first before they got down to it.

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2013 at 3:45 PM

    Vacant souls...seems like there must be some message there....

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  6. KappuJanuary 12, 2013 at 6:02 AM

    Vacant souls are what we focus on always.. ;D

    Do visit my blog! Would love to see you by! *cheers*

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