The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
of JzB see my other blog, Retirement Blues. (There be dragons!)

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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Thursday, August 14, 2014

Five Sentence Fiction - Maps


 
"How much farther is it, Maud?"

"We should be getting close," she said.

They got off their bi-tryke, sat at the roots of a bramblewood tree, and studied the old map.

"Still so far," Glyness said with a longing sigh, "but he swore it would be worth our while"

They remounted the bi-trike and pedaled deeper into the gathering fog.


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7 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 15, 2014 at 4:52 AM

    Well written using the prompt and the picture :)

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  2. AnonymousAugust 15, 2014 at 12:15 PM

    Let's hope it is.
    A great take on the prompt.

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  3. Pawan HegdeAugust 16, 2014 at 11:41 AM

    Hopefully they find it before it gets dark. :)

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  4. AnonymousAugust 16, 2014 at 3:15 PM

    Love it.

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  5. AnonymousAugust 17, 2014 at 12:14 PM

    Ohhhh.. I sense that something not so positive is going to be found at the end of their ride! Great little tale!

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  6. Tina BasuAugust 19, 2014 at 1:35 AM

    great use of the photo. well done

    Tina from The Sunny Side of Life

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  7. CifarAugust 19, 2014 at 2:22 AM

    nice take on the prompt

    Maps To Peace

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