Kristjaan gives us two quotes on WALLS from Kalil Gibran
[...] "After all
this is not a bad prison; but I do not like this wall between my cell and the
next prisoner’s cell; Yet I assure you that I do not wish to reproach the
warder not the Builder of the prison".[...]
[...] "Sadness is but a wall between two gardens". [...]
[...] "Sadness is but a wall between two gardens". [...]
Kristjaan then presents us with a wonderful positive example. Mine is a bit darker
tearing down the walls
giving room to wild flowers
to color the earth
© Chèvrefeuille
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On our visit to the garden today, Suzie Clevenger asks us to "stop, breathe, and focus on things that are positive." She has chosen some Native American aphorisms for our consideration and inspiration.
I found the inspiration, but, alas, have not succeeded in focusing on the positive.
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"We are all one child spinning through Mother Sky." – Shawnee
all men are brothers
living in the same tepee ~
big family fight
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"The soul would have no rainbow if the eye had no tears." - Tribe Unknown
from deepest valley
the far away mountain tops
appear the highest
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"Listen, or your tongue will make you deaf." - Tribe Unknown
my wisdom is best
hear it from my silver tongue
why don't you listen
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"To touch the earth is to have harmony with nature." - Oglala Sioux
i have touched the earth
with my bulldozer and crane
one more shopping mall
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"The frog does not drink up the pond in which he lives." – Sioux
This one brings to mind Matsuo Basho's famous haiku
the old pond ~
a frog jumps in
sound of water
sound of water
but still ----
moose goose and mankind
two find forest harmony
one soils his own nest
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if man learns to live with nature , the world will be at peace
ReplyDeleteYour haiku expand on the themes well.
ReplyDeleteNow this is clever and so inspiring!
ReplyDeleteGreat haiku! Love all the quotes!
ReplyDeleteI particularly like the brothers piece!
ReplyDeleteGoodness, you took on all those quotes and wrote the perfect haiku for each one..I know it is hard to be positive with all the discord we hear. Thank you so much for taking part in the challenge.
ReplyDeleteI was going to quote your second haiku and said how perfectly amazing it was, then I read the third... and the forth... and the next... and I'm in awe--you've told such a beautiful tale with each piece. Wonderful!
ReplyDeleteOh, those family fights--I know them well!
ReplyDeleteOn a Crumbling Wall
a story in a stroke...love them all....the brothers' haiku made me smile too....
ReplyDeleteYou have combined wisdom and fun in a delightful way.
ReplyDeleteGreat post JzB, all those nice Native American proverbs are really gorgeous and the haiku inspired on them are little gems.
ReplyDeleteancient wisdom
ReplyDeletetold through out the ages
and still ignored
Loved your series of haiku based on the proverbs of the people. Fun!
I love it best when you contrast the native's wisdom with the modern man's folly....
ReplyDeleteI like the way that you interspersed the quotes in with your haiku...and the last line of the last haiku is profound.
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