Inspirational haiku
Chanting, the pond's frogs ...
among the lilies' dark pads -
the twinkle of stars
among the lilies' dark pads -
the twinkle of stars
brown spotted toad - denizen of my yard
~ 1 ~
Here is a 5-7-5 I wrote for this little guy three years ago
this Amphibian
moved from grass to patio
saved from lawn-mower's bite
moved from grass to patio
saved from lawn-mower's bite
~ 2 ~
after the rain storm
thunder fades and croaking starts
the music of frogs
thunder fades and croaking starts
the music of frogs
~ 3 ~
dead amphibian
padded under starry skies
tell me why he croaked
padded under starry skies
tell me why he croaked
~~::~~
Ha!ha!Loved your take on the 3rd one-great play with words :-)
ReplyDeleteThe 3 moods!2nd is a classic though...
ReplyDeleteGroan of laughter on the last one!
ReplyDeleteThank your for this romp through the swamp, so to speak!! I love those brown spotted toads!
ReplyDeleteThat third haiku is really stunning and full of Zen ... it gives me a strong feeling of emptiness and loneliness ... awesome.
ReplyDeleteI wonder who has the answer to the conundrum you pose in the last haiku?
ReplyDeleteBullfrog
It was either going to be you or I (or both) that couldn't resist using croaked :)
ReplyDeleteThree so different and still of the same choir... The 2nd one stands out for me - beautiful!
ReplyDeleteyour resident frog must have felt flattered that you wrote such marvelous haiku just for him (her?)
ReplyDeleteSigh...but i do love how you think ☺
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
That second one is very classic... I love it
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