a patter of rain ...
the lily-pad undulates
on widening rings
I'm not sure this is in the spirit of Southard, but it's the image that came to me:
see her undulate
on the dance floor - hips moving
in widening rings
[but please - no twerking]
I can see her dance... wonderful -- a brave woman
ReplyDeleteAh yes, this puts a smile on my face--entrancing ;)
ReplyDeleteI think this haiku is in the 'mood' of the one by Southard.
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