For my haikus, I have interpreted the word "blossoms" first as a verb, then as a noun.
I searched in vain for a picture of a Michigan plum blossom, and finally settled for this one, from Japan. The lonely blossom seems fitting. Also some plum haiku at the source.
Early Plum Blossoms
I
Early plum blossoms
Too soon, then is ravaged by
Harsh Michigan frost
Too soon, then is ravaged by
Harsh Michigan frost
~ ~ ~
II
Early bird gets the
Worm; Early plum blossoms are
Nipped by late Spring frost
Carpe Diem # 75
I like both of your haiku. They're really beautiful JzB. Thank you for participating in Carpe Diem.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the haiku and the explanation. They are all a joy to read :)
ReplyDeleteInteresting information about that terrible frost, poor plum blossoms!
ReplyDeleteI like the use you have made of the famous early bird... in this prompt and then the storm nipping the flowers. Sometimes it's better to go on sleeping to avoid damage.
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Darn those spring frosts! Lovely haiku and back round info very helpful! thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteVery humorous in a way ~ fun haiku ~ lovely photo ~
ReplyDelete(A Creative Harbor ~ aka ~ ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^)
It is a shame to wait all year for those plums - and have them destroyed overnight!! Our taste buds must wait another year ... plus an unpleasant demise for the farmers counting on the crop. Thank you for sharing.
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Very nice and good explanation, me too I expect the frost to be damaging to the plum bloom.
ReplyDeleteGood one ...though bad n sad for the early plum blossom..:)
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