TIME OUT
Marci met The Time Shifter at a small, out of the way club where he played magical jazz piano for tips he didn't need and drinks that seemed to sustain him.
He also worked real magic and, for a while, she thought he might be a god.
At midnight, after he finished off a set of odd-metered Brubeck tunes* with The Unsquare Dance - and she finished off her third glass of Pinot Noir - he walked a long way with her through shadow to a place where time slips along a different stream and the gibbous sun hung just past its zenith.
They made love there on the soft grass by a waterfall under the sheltering boughs of a weirwood tree, slept entwined, then, as the russet sun stained the late afternoon sky magenta, made love again.
When they walked back into the club, only nine minutes had elapsed.
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As a haiku
Time flies when you make
Love, but if the time is right,
Takes no time at all.
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As a six word story
Love
At times
Can be timeless
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* Dave Brubeck passed on yesterday. He would have been 92 today. He was a pioneer in taking jazz to times and places never before explored with tunes like TAKE FIVE, BLUE RONDO ALA TURK, and the simple but not simplistic UNSQUARE DANCE.
My brief paean to Dave Brubeck can be found here.
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This vignette, another part of Marci's back story, occurs several years before Marci and Gil reunite - in fact, before they even met for the first time.
Marci's thread
The full story was great, but I think I liked the haiku best. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful post, and yes, we mourn David... Good time for Marci though, lucky gal! :)
ReplyDeletehttp://ofglassandpaper.com/2012/12/06/fivesentencefiction-time/
What a great idea of paring it down into smaller and smaller works! I liked all versions of it
ReplyDeleteBeautiful tribute to both love and good music, how well they blend together!
ReplyDeleteVery true the haiku
ReplyDeleteGreat story! And I love that you included the haiku as well. The description in your piece was fabulous.
ReplyDeletegreat story, haiku and 6 words.
ReplyDeleteBut a gibbous sun (?) just mooned me on the horizon (ha.)
Love x time = eternal
My 3 word equation poem back at you.
obviously your work was not gibbous but fully appreciated.
Randy
Very nicely done, both the prose and the poetry. I particularly enjoyed the Haiku. Good work.
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