ICICLES
Spies at my window
Glistening with star secrets
Those cold evesdroppers
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
A clear frozen flow
That reflects the round worldscape
Dripping in sunshine
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
In desert winter
No icicles to stick you
Just cactus needles
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Piercing Icicle
Deep in my left ventricle
As cold as lost love
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Cold flowing sadness
As you drift away from me
Ice blade in my heart
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Icicle prison
At the universe's end
Doom of entropy
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
[And for a touch of the macabre]
It melts in the sink
Perfect to bludgeon or stab:
Murder implement
Nice haiku JzB ... very well done ...
ReplyDeleteI REALLY love the last one !!!
ReplyDeletethe first one is perfect,i believe. and i also like the last one ^^
ReplyDeleteWow, Brian de Palma or master Hitchcock would have loved your haiku for one of their movies.
ReplyDeleteThis is my fav:
Piercing Icicle
Deep in my left ventricle
As cold as lost love
I am trembling!
:)
Thank you for the prickly haiku!
ReplyDeleteSpies at my window
ReplyDeleteGlistening with star secrets
Those cold evesdroppers
...I love that one especially. Thank you :)
A melting murder implement might not hit its mark!
ReplyDeleteIcicles
Well done with this diverse icicle set. The first is my favorite!!
ReplyDeleteMay the Spirit of Christmas infuse every particle of your life. Enjoy!!
Frozen Paws
I enjoyed your haiku...I think the first is the one that speaks to me most.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing.