The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Friday, August 16, 2013

Carpe Diem #273, Sapphire


sapphire
can your blue light guide the way
to heaven

Carpe Diem #273

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  1. AnonymousAugust 16, 2013 at 11:04 PM

    I love this though I wonder if it would benefit from a question mark at the end.

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    1. JazzbumpaAugust 16, 2013 at 11:28 PM

      fair question

      i've become convinced that punctuation marks have no place in kaiku

      Cheers!
      JzB

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    2. JazzbumpaAugust 16, 2013 at 11:29 PM

      nor in haiku for that matter

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    3. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 17, 2013 at 1:29 PM

      What a challenge that would be: to write a kaiku! (How should I begin?) :)

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    4. JazzbumpaAugust 17, 2013 at 8:38 PM

      every work must start with the letter k

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    5. JazzbumpaAugust 17, 2013 at 8:39 PM

      and every word for that matter

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  2. LollyAugust 17, 2013 at 12:25 AM

    B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L

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  3. AnonymousAugust 17, 2013 at 7:45 AM

    Just lovely ..and you are correct..no punctuation.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 17, 2013 at 9:16 AM

    lovely and inspiring ~ thanks, carol, xo

    ps hope moose and goose are doing well, ^_^

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    1. JazzbumpaAugust 17, 2013 at 10:46 AM

      thanks

      m and g will be back when the prompts are more amenable

      Cheers!
      JzB

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    2. Magical Mystical TeacherAugust 17, 2013 at 1:30 PM

      What kind of prompts do M and G need? Just curious...

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    3. JazzbumpaAugust 17, 2013 at 8:40 PM

      i know them when i see them

      sometimes

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  5. TigerbriteAugust 17, 2013 at 9:40 AM

    I'm sure sapphire is on the rainbow bridge:)

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  6. Siggi in Downeast MaineAugust 17, 2013 at 5:24 PM

    I love this...thanks.
    As for punctuation marks,
    I seldom use them,
    and am beginning to think as you...
    leave them and let the reader's thoughts
    put their own in.

    Peace,
    Siggi

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  7. ChèvrefeuilleAugust 18, 2013 at 4:27 AM

    I think Sapphire blue will lead you to Heaven.

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  8. Maggie GraceAugust 21, 2013 at 11:59 PM

    I don't need punctuation to understand how beautiful this is.

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