The Lighter Side of JzB

Here you will find photos, poetry, and possibly some light-hearted foolishness. For the Heavier Side
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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku


"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Friday, August 16, 2013

Carpe Diem #273, Sapphire


sapphire
can your blue light guide the way
to heaven

Carpe Diem #273

17 comments:

  1. I love this though I wonder if it would benefit from a question mark at the end.

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    1. fair question

      i've become convinced that punctuation marks have no place in kaiku

      Cheers!
      JzB

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    2. nor in haiku for that matter

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    3. What a challenge that would be: to write a kaiku! (How should I begin?) :)

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    4. every work must start with the letter k

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    5. and every word for that matter

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  2. Just lovely ..and you are correct..no punctuation.

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  3. lovely and inspiring ~ thanks, carol, xo

    ps hope moose and goose are doing well, ^_^

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    1. thanks

      m and g will be back when the prompts are more amenable

      Cheers!
      JzB

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    2. What kind of prompts do M and G need? Just curious...

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    3. i know them when i see them

      sometimes

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  4. I'm sure sapphire is on the rainbow bridge:)

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  5. I love this...thanks.
    As for punctuation marks,
    I seldom use them,
    and am beginning to think as you...
    leave them and let the reader's thoughts
    put their own in.

    Peace,
    Siggi

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  6. I think Sapphire blue will lead you to Heaven.

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  7. I don't need punctuation to understand how beautiful this is.

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