LATE
~ 1 ~
i promised my friends
i'd return by moon rise
but i met this girl
~ 2 ~
on a moonless night
my key slips into her lock
did she miss me
my key slips into her lock
did she miss me
~ 3 ~
under the full moon
i wait in the pale gray light
still alone at dawn
~ 4 ~
clouds cover the moon
on the cold stone of her grave
i place a red rose
~~~
Inspired by the theme at
these are so wonderfully done
ReplyDeleteNice to see you at Haiku Heights, JzB. All lovely but third and fourth are beautiful expressions of thought.
ReplyDeleteI like them all...? unlucky in love per chance ? ☺
ReplyDeletePeace
Siggi
What a poignant and profound Haiku!
ReplyDeleteWelcome back Jazzbumpa, and I say it is better late than never!! Missed your wit and humor in words here!! ;)
ReplyDeletelove the first one. lovely bouquet of Haiku.
ReplyDeleteAs always your poems run the gamut of emotions! I loved the poignancy of the last one. It made me shiver with sadness!
ReplyDeleteAll are good..Last one is gripping...
ReplyDeleteRS
Very good. Sounds like you were moon gazing:)
ReplyDeleteThe last painted an especially vivid picture.