The Lighter Side of JzB

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Every day visits*
From Moose, Goose, and Orb Weaver
All seized by Haiku

"Why moose and goose?" you may ask. Back on 2/04/13 Pirate wrote a haiku with an elk in it, and I responded with
one with a moose and then included him every day. A few days later in comments Mystic asked "Where's the goose?"
So I started including her with this post on 2/07. A week later on the 14th, Mark Readfern
asked for and received a spider. The rest is history.

*Well, most days, anyway. Grant me a bit of poetic license.

Thursday, August 29, 2013

Five Sentence Fiction – Thunder

THUNDER

It's been building in me all day, this gloomy dark brooding mood.

Now the negative ions cluster thicker, swirling a bit, and darker, ever darker.

Here comes another - just like me, he thinks - into my air space.

Rubbing me the wrong way.

"Hey," I say to him, "you want to rumble?"


Lillie McFerrin Writes

Five Sentence Fiction  - Thunder

 

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7 comments:

  1. a spirit of simplicityAugust 29, 2013 at 4:38 PM

    sometimes rumbling helps to get rid of the grumpy

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  2. SusanAugust 29, 2013 at 5:51 PM

    Nice take on the prompt. Cool!

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  3. Melanie ColeAugust 30, 2013 at 12:39 PM

    Ha! Love it!!

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  4. K R SmithAugust 31, 2013 at 9:24 AM

    Let's get ready to rumble! (Sorry - I couldn't resist...) Very good!

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 1, 2013 at 2:44 PM

    This is good. I think many may relate!

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  6. DobsonSeptember 4, 2013 at 9:50 AM

    Are you hot or cold. Whichever the other guy must be the opposite since you are going to rumble.

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  7. JazzbumpaSeptember 4, 2013 at 10:08 AM

    I think some of the commentors have missed the point that the narrator is a storm cloud.

    JzB

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