Poplar Impressions
poplar reflection
green image on blue water
fades in the sunset
~:~
swishing poplar switch
on a young one's bare behind
makes an impression
green image on blue water
fades in the sunset
~:~
swishing poplar switch
on a young one's bare behind
makes an impression
The wrong impression, of course...
ReplyDeleteInteresting !
ReplyDeleteYouch!
ReplyDeleteThat first haiku is a beauty JzB a nice impression caught in three lines, your second however ... brought a smile on my face ... your old school in educating ... :-)
ReplyDeletethank you
Deletei am quite happy with the first one
the second - i don't know where that came from
cheers
jzb
I like the way your colored font choice reinforces the content of your words.
ReplyDeletethanx!
DeleteI had to laugh at the second one. The first one is great!
ReplyDeletehow young :-)
ReplyDeleteold enough to know better?
DeleteLoved the first and remembered the second ;-)
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