brutal
grope
transfer
Dark. An invitation to the dance macabre. It's beyond my capacity to make anything nice out of these words. So - let's get it over quick.
an unwanted grope
a brutal fluid transfer
another conquest
a brutal fluid transfer
another conquest
Now I must go scrub my brain with a Brillo pad.
"unwanted" is the (troubling) key here...
ReplyDeleteI think grope pretty strongly implies unwanted, but yeah, you're right.
ReplyDeleteJzB
scrub scrub scrub
ReplyDeleteoh my that is very scary. (although the brillo pad sentence afterwards does help to lighten things.) the poem is very powerful and well written.
ReplyDeleteI've noticed a fair number of this weeks 3WW posts have been leaning towards the darker sides of the words. Very effective use of nine words.
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