inspirational haiku
~o~o~o~
my humble inspirations
~ 1 ~
a cardinal sings
to find the singer look high
in the tallest tree
~ 2 ~
the pine tree whispers
and the spring breeze responds
do you understand
~ 3 ~
without the breeze
pine tree's sacred wisdom
would stay a secret
~ 4 ~
soft spring breezes
sing with a pine needle scent
music for the soul
~ 5 ~
when the old man speaks
all the pine trees listen
the breeze overhears
~ 6 ~
under a pine tree
safe from the whispering wind
moose and goose tell all
~ 7 ~
from the pine tree top
spider sees her hatchlings go
sail on the spring breeze
suzukaze ya koku ni michite matsu no koe
the cool
breeze
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine-tree
fills the empty vault of heaven
with the voice of the pine-tree
(c) Onitsura (1660-1738)
~o~o~o~
my humble inspirations
~ 1 ~
a cardinal sings
to find the singer look high
in the tallest tree
~ 2 ~
the pine tree whispers
and the spring breeze responds
do you understand
~ 3 ~
without the breeze
pine tree's sacred wisdom
would stay a secret
~ 4 ~
soft spring breezes
sing with a pine needle scent
music for the soul
~ 5 ~
when the old man speaks
all the pine trees listen
the breeze overhears
~ 6 ~
under a pine tree
safe from the whispering wind
moose and goose tell all
~ 7 ~
from the pine tree top
spider sees her hatchlings go
sail on the spring breeze
~o~o~o~
I'd like to write a haiku beginning:
ReplyDeletewhen the pine tree speaks
all the old men listen
But then, what do I know about either old men or pine trees? :)
Beneath the Pine Tree
Well, I could help you with the old man part . . .
ReplyDeleteCheers!
JzB
Your third poem is an exquisitely perfect response to Onitsura! Well done, my poet friend, well done!
ReplyDeleteWabiSabi -
ReplyDeleteThanks. You are most kind.
Cheers!
JzB
I'm with WabiSabi, the 3rd was elegant....and I can't help thinking how many difficulties you create for that poor spider..
ReplyDeleteThat 3rd one is truly a real masterpiece. Very good.
ReplyDeleteEverybody seems to be so enchanted by #3, but I'm going to be contrary and vote for #6. I think Moose and Goose deserve some kind of award for telling all (unlike our prevaricating politicians). Perhaps you could give them what they deserve in your next episode. I hope so!
ReplyDeleteSeductive Pine
#3 and #4 really touch me...wonderful!
ReplyDeletealoha JzB - way cool on that first one. i like the "look high in the tallest tree" line. you pegged the eastern cardinals around here too. aloha.
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