Here are my thoughts, with an assist to Kristjaan
~ 1 ~
last snow melts
now the ground will be covered
with cherry blossoms
~ 2 ~
end of snow
what do we lose then
as spring is coming
~ 3 ~
late snow falling
old man in a barber chair
clippings on the floor
~ 4 ~
winters end
trees and bushes sprout new blooms
food for moose and goose
~ 5 ~
trees and bushes bloom
leaves sprout on once bare banches
spider's hiding place
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
It's always exciting to witness the season's changing. I enjoyed each verse in your haiku.
ReplyDeleteI wonder if the old man enjoys the snowfall from his perch in the barber's chair...
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Nice! Looking forward to those cherry blossoms!
ReplyDeleteGood to see the old man made it from his bed for a hair cut :)
ReplyDeleteThe visual image of the end of snow has been sketched beautifully through those haiku ! Loved them :)
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really great set, each one different from the other. chuckled at that 3rd haiku.. and very pretty image that first haiku creates ^^
ReplyDeleteoh good, goose and moose seem to have large appetites
Your first one is true haiku.
ReplyDeletealoha JzB - i definitely like what you have going on in #3. i also like that it uses the fragment and phrase thinking of haiku as well. very cool. aloha.
ReplyDeleteI would think that those sprouting leaves would be Spider's new weaving studio!
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all ur haikus are very imaginative...GOD<3U
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ReplyDeletewho still has snow on the roof
gives thanks
I especially enjoyed the comparison of the clippings dropping from the barber's chair
ReplyDeleteI mean...
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Barber chair comparison -
Winter's coat falling
the end of winter can be very inspiring! beautiful haiku!
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