~ 1 ~
thin frost layer
on my martini glass
dry ice
~ 2 ~
Spring morning
I cleverly test the ice
my foot is wet
~ 3 ~
cormorant
stares longingly through the ice
fish stare back
~ 4 ~
risk taker
tempts fate skating
on thin ice
~ 5 ~
icy pond
goose steps on cicada wings
wise moose waits on shore
~ 6 ~
cicada wings
coat orb weaver's web
no dinner for her
I cleverly test the ice
my foot is wet
~ 3 ~
cormorant
stares longingly through the ice
fish stare back
~ 4 ~
risk taker
tempts fate skating
on thin ice
~ 5 ~
icy pond
goose steps on cicada wings
wise moose waits on shore
~ 6 ~
cicada wings
coat orb weaver's web
no dinner for her
~ : ~
Staring contest
ReplyDeleteuntil the ice melts
fish blinks
A wet foot means only one thing: You've lost your ice-testing knack!
ReplyDeleteThin Rind of Ice
A dark , story with a sad ending . Nicely weaved !
ReplyDeletesmiled at the image of cormorant and fish staring at each other ^^ well-penned set
ReplyDeleteI love the standoff between the cormorant the the fish!
ReplyDeleteThin Ice
clever progression
ReplyDeleteEspecially like your bird staring at the fish. And love your moose and goose haiku today!
ReplyDeleteReally like #1.
ReplyDeleteThe cormorant one is excellent among a lot of god ones.
ReplyDeleteWise moose ~ for sure ~ Fun and variety haiku ~ well penned ^_^
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