~ 1 ~
high soaring kite
seems to be flying free
bird on a leash
~ 2 ~
dragon kite
soaring high overhead
no fire in the wind
~ 3 ~
no kite this time
Daenerys soars on Drogon
fire in the wind
~ 4 ~
your image
on a high flying kite
tugs at my heart strings
~ 5 ~
old man flies a kite
remembering a time when
the wind filled his sails
~ 6 ~
goose's kite string
tangles in moose's antlers
born on an ill wind
~ 7 ~
spider hatchling
sails off on a silken thread
a living kite
high soaring kite
seems to be flying free
bird on a leash
~ 2 ~
dragon kite
soaring high overhead
no fire in the wind
~ 3 ~
no kite this time
Daenerys soars on Drogon
fire in the wind
~ 4 ~
your image
on a high flying kite
tugs at my heart strings
~ 5 ~
old man flies a kite
remembering a time when
the wind filled his sails
~ 6 ~
goose's kite string
tangles in moose's antlers
born on an ill wind
~ 7 ~
spider hatchling
sails off on a silken thread
a living kite
~~~#
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#1 love the illusion of freedom.....and #5 sad, but at least the old man still has some memory left.....
ReplyDeleteI do love your old man series JzB.
ReplyDeleteSuch wonderful words and visions for all your haiku. Giggles for kite in moose's antlers but still a lovely read. "bird on a leash"...excellent ♥
ReplyDeleteNice. It is fun to see this--I also had the concept of the leash. I don't read everyone else's (except sometimes Kristjaan's) before doing my own, so we thought alike :) And thanks for explaining moose and goose. It is a fun thing to read.
ReplyDeleteNo.5 reminds me of Spencer Tracy.
ReplyDeleteOh your last two really spoke to me! Your words tickle and provoke thoughtful reflection too! Thanks!
ReplyDeleteI am enchanted by the tiny living kite, sailing away on a silken thread. Oh, lovely!
ReplyDeleteKites
Oh the spider one was great today JzB
ReplyDeleteold man flies a kite
ReplyDeleteremembering a time when
the wind filled his sails
A wonderful series of haiku JzB, but the above one is really my favorite.
Beauitiful sets...esp.
ReplyDelete"spider hatchling
sails off on a silken thread
a living kite"--Ah,my favorite!
aloha Jzb - i like the connections you make in the first and last ku. birds on a string. and a spider kite. cool. cool. cool. aloha.
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